🔖 The Obsessions That We Hide

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Author : AngelDirectioner15

Reviewer : srabonyislam

Reviewer : srabonyislam

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COVER : 10/10

I love the cover. It's unique just like the story. Good job with the cover.

TITLE : 10/10

As your cover you did a good job with your title. Title perfectly justify your story. It is also unique and amazing.

BLURB : 10/10

Blurb was interesting. It was described well. There was a uniqueness in the blurb which can attract readers easily.

CREATIVITY : 9/10

As your story guideline was unique, I found it really creative. And also, the way you describe every situations I love that. Good job.

PLOT : 14/15

The plots have unique elements and this uniqueness make your plots more interesting. I love all plots. Try to try to make your plots more well arranged.

CHARACTERS :10/10

The way you describe characters and their situations I loved it. I can feel every situations of characters while reading . Amazing job. Loved it.

GRAMMAR : 14/15

Your grammar is good. Try to use better vocabulary. And be more careful with your spelling.

COMMUNICATION : 3/5

You didn't replied all comments. Try to reply all comments. In every chapters their were many comments by one person, so try to reply at least two comments.

OVERALL IMPRESSION : 14/15

Overall I love the story, you did a good job with creativity, plots, characters. I absolutely loved it. Their were some tiny mistake I mentioned earlier try to improve that.

TOTAL : 94/100

I hope my review will help you in your story. Best of luck.

 Best of luck

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