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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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🌼 COVER : 10/10
Your cover is way too simple. But, I still love it. It goes well with the theme of the story.
🌼 TITLE : 10/10
Just like the cover, your story title is also simple. But, it's very cute. It represents the character Cynthia in a very perfect way. Which is why I love it.
🌼 BLURB : 10/10
Though your blurb is very short, it gives a very rough sketch of the story. It has perfect portion of information of the story.
🌼 CREATIVITY : 8/10
Author you're very creative without any doubt. Your story layout is very good. Paragraph, lining and spacing is also very good. But, you could make it more beautiful. For example, you can use italics when any thought of any character. Also, some scenes needed to be described a bit more.
🌼 PLOT : 14/15
There's not much critical plot in the story. Plots are simple and has a smooth flow. But, I think you could make it more interesting by adding some spice in it.
🌼 CHARACTERS : 8/10
Characters are good and simple. But, your characters needs more information. Better giving a list of the characters with a little information about them. It helps the readers to understand every character well. Also, make the characters more realistic. Describe their feelings more.
🌼 GRAMMAR : 12/15
Your grammar is on line. But, you missed loads and loads of punctuation marks and use of some capital/small letters.
🌼 COMMUNICATION : 3/5
Dear author, you're amazing. But, interact with your readers more. Try to reply everyone's comments. Readers feels more connected to the writer if the writer interacts with them.
🌼 OVERALL IMPRESSION : 12/15
In my opinion, your book is good. I enjoyed reading it. Try to improve the things pointed out above.
🌼 TOTAL : 87/100
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