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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
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• COVER : 8/10
The first cover sparked interest and urge to let you read more. It gave off this mysterious vibes. The new cover was okay. I just felt it was a little plain and common.
• TITLE : 8/10
It was okay, but a little bit confusing at first. Which added flare to the story but also can be a disadvantage.
• BLURB : 7/10
It was catchy, just a little bit dissapointed with some fonts since it isn't visible on all devices. I understand that the author just wants to more aesthetic feels, but just keep in mind that not all readers have advanced devices.
• CREATIVITY : 7/10
It wasn't that mind blowing when it came to the storyline. But the explanation was okay. Just a little bit confused since some POV wasn't explained well, and the switching was abrupt.
• PLOT : 10/15
It was a little bit common. With the events and the way the MC lived her life. But since it is still in the starting phase, I hope to see more scenarios and plot twists.
• CHARACTERS : 7/10
As I've said, the characters didn't have any improvement from the following chapters. They kinda lack of personality. I would suggest adding more to each characters and how they interact.
• GRAMMAR : 14/15
The grammar was good. Minor edits would be seen but all in all it was good.
• COMMUNICATION : 2/5
Doesn't reply mostly to reader's comments but always leave an author's note at the end of a chapter.
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 12/15
The story itself lacks personality. It was given that the plot was cliche but it was a little bit disappointing that the interaction with the readers was limited. Also there weren't much to see since this is still in the starting phase. I just hope that as the story progresses more plot twist would be added.
• TOTAL : 75/100
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