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🔖 Pink Veil

Author : inwarddramatist

Reviewer : belkisaris

• COVER : 10/10

Cover it is done really great and it will attract curious readers.

• TITLE : 10/10

Title is brilliant and even though when I first didn't understand the title until I started to read the book, the title intrigued me. I can honestly tell you that I haven't seen any other title like yours.

• BLURB : 10/10

For a moment I thought that the blurb was going to be too short but when I started to read it after first reading a few chapters I found out it's actually perfect it gives you just enough information to spike your interest.

• CREATIVITY : 10/10

I want to thank you for writing a book like this; I haven't seen a lot of books about transgender and I think this type of books are needed as there are a lot of kids going through the same thing and it's really relatable.

• PLOT : 15/15

I must admit when I read the second summary I thought this would be your typical boy who did the girl wrong. She comes back years later and they fall in love. But I was so wrong although Rachel was bullied it looks to me that Foster Wilson tries to prevent the horrible event I am looking forward to finding out why she blames him for more.

• CHARACTERS : 10/10

I haven't read that many chapters, and I am already in love with Rachel Smith. Although she's not your typical feisty heroin, I do love the nervousness of her character as it makes the story more relatable. I can see that you did your research well and developed the characters perfectly. You should feel proud.

• GRAMMAR : 13/15

You did really well with editing the chapters but I notice very small grammatical errors, nothing a good read over won't fix. Your grammar was almost perfect so I think you have something downloaded into your computer already but just in the case that you haven't. I have grammatically and ProWrittingAid.

• COMMUNICATION : 3/5

You did answer a few of the comments of readers, but I notice a lot of them without response. I think this book will go places and take it from me. People love when their favorite writer responds back, it makes them keep reading the story as they feel appreciated.

• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 15/15

I love this story and even though I have read only a few chapters for the review; I am hooked and I will continue to read in my spare time as I NEED to know how Rachel's life changes for the better. ( I hope) You did amazing and if it weren't for the small grammatical mistake and the communication with the readers, this would be a 100/100 But still an impressive score keep up the great work!

• TOTAL : 96/100