🔖 Stars Of Memory

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Author : booklover241014

Reviewer: akiimarvelous

Reviewer: akiimarvelous

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COVER : 10/10

The cover is beautiful and matches with the title.

TITLE : 10/10

The title is catchy and captivating.

BLURB : 8/10

The blurb is descriptive and intriguing but there are grammar mistakes which you need to fix. For example " She wonders what they want with her, why do they want her" can be also written as, " She wonders what they want to do with her, why do they want her"

CREATIVITY : 10/10

The scenes are described in a beautiful way.

PLOT - 15/15

Great storyline.

CHARACTERS : 10/10

Beautifully knitted characters which gives us an insight to their lives. Each and every character has been described very minutely.

GRAMMAR : 9/15

Grammar and Spellings are the most important part of any story. There are a lot of grammatical errors in your chapters that you need to fix including the blurb.

COMMUNICATION : 5/5

You communicate with the readers and answer their questions which keeps you connected with your readers.

OVERALL IMPRESSION : 14/15

Beautiful Story! I absolutely enjoyed reading it! Highly recommended.

TOTAL : 91/100

Suggestion: I can only suggest you to edit all the grammatical errors.

Keep Writing!

Good Luck!

Good Luck!

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