Author : booklover241014
Reviewer: akiimarvelous
• COVER : 10/10
The cover is beautiful and matches with the title.
• TITLE : 10/10
The title is catchy and captivating.
• BLURB : 8/10
The blurb is descriptive and intriguing but there are grammar mistakes which you need to fix. For example " She wonders what they want with her, why do they want her" can be also written as, " She wonders what they want to do with her, why do they want her"
• CREATIVITY : 10/10
The scenes are described in a beautiful way.
• PLOT - 15/15
Great storyline.
• CHARACTERS : 10/10
Beautifully knitted characters which gives us an insight to their lives. Each and every character has been described very minutely.
• GRAMMAR : 9/15
Grammar and Spellings are the most important part of any story. There are a lot of grammatical errors in your chapters that you need to fix including the blurb.
• COMMUNICATION : 5/5
You communicate with the readers and answer their questions which keeps you connected with your readers.
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 14/15
Beautiful Story! I absolutely enjoyed reading it! Highly recommended.
• TOTAL : 91/100
Suggestion: I can only suggest you to edit all the grammatical errors.
Keep Writing!
Good Luck!
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