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🔖 Black Alice (The Silver Year)

Author : Afro_Heiress

Reviewer : belkisaris

• COVER : 10/10

Your cover is amazing if someone did that cover for you they did an amazing job. I am pretty confident that there will be a lot of people that scroll and see this cover and will click on your book to read it. Great job!

• TITLE : 10/10

I love your title. Not only is it unique and original is very calling and inviting to check out your book. Titles are hard to do and coming up with the main character as a title is brilliant as no one else would have the same title.

• BLURB : 9/10

I think your blurb is perfect, but I deducted a point because although I know what you are trying to do with the first part I couldn't read it. It was really hard to understand the message and after a few seconds my eyes started just skimming through it and it could mean losing some potential readers which would be a shame as your story is amazing. I would suggest using a different font that is understandable and you would have a perfect blurb.

• CREATIVITY : 10/10

I am really impressed with your creativity and I can honestly say I haven't seen another book quite like yours and I think with the times that we are living now your book would be inspiring to read.

• PLOT : 15/15

Just like with your creativity, your plot is amazing. Everyone has done the bet type of plot and in my honest opinion it has been overused, but I found the fact that there is a secret organization about doing bets and showing the proof refreshingly original I wouldn't be surprised if I saw your book turn into one of the next Netflix movies.

• CHARACTERS : 10/10

You should feel really proud of your characters, not only I found them refreshingly original like everything in your book but they were relatable. If I was reading this book on my own, I would have to finish it in a week or so. My favorite character is Alice, I think she's a strong girl and would love to see her grow into a powerful girl as the book progresses.

• GRAMMAR : 10/15

Although I could see the chapters have been edited, and there wasn't that much error. There were still some grammar errors. I know editing is a pain and I am not sure if you already use an app to help you with editing if you don't. I have downloaded Grammatically and ProWrittingAid as they have a free version and although they are amazing; they are not perfect and won't make your chapters error free, I would suggest getting an editor. They are not easy to find, but there are clubs and people in Wattpad that want to help writers and edit books for free.

• COMMUNICATION : 3 / 5

Although you did answer back to some comments there were a lot of them that were left blank. I wasn't sure if it was because they were recent and you haven't gotten to them or because they were from a book club and although book clubs are assigned books between authors, it's always nice to reply to comments not all of them but just an acknowledgement that you see their comments and are thankful.

• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 15/15

I feel like saying I love your book is quite short although I couldn't read more than a few chapters for the review. I enjoyed each and every single one of them and will go back to finish this amazing book once I have more free time. You should feel proud of what you created here, I honestly believe there should be more books in Wattpad where the main character is black and not only that you're educating people about Africa in this book. Like I said before, you should feel proud!

• TOTAL : 92/100