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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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• COVER : 10/10
The cover is great and accurately gives your readers an idea of what the book is all about.
• TITLE : 10/10
"To be Me And Free". Already shows the readers that your story is all about wanting to be yourself and just enjoy life without any limitations. Which is in perfect sync with your story.
• BLURB : 6/10
Your blurb is informative but too long. I lost track. Try to make it shorter and catchy. Something that will engage potential readers. The description should be just as good as the story.
• CREATIVITY : 13/15
You're ability to incorporate something that I haven't read about is impeccable. I wasn't expecting the wings. But I failed to find a hint anywhere else to brace me for the wings. Like are they angels or just normal people with wings? Keep in mind that you need to let your readers understand everything to keep them engaged.
• PLOT : 10/10
I found your plot to be great and very insightful. And it also gives the readers a chance to learn and serve as reminder of how to treat certain situations. Just work on descriptions.
• CHARACTERS : 10/10
I love how the characters are divers and how it comes together. I like how you give us a chance to see every character's feelings and how they all deal with their situations.
• GRAMMAR : 15/15
I did not find anything wrong with your grammar. Everything was great. So easy to read. I encourage you to keep up the good work!
• COMMUNICATION : 2/5
Sadly, I find LITTLE communication with the readers. Please try to reply to them or even a simple thanks just for reading and voting. Nevertheless I like how at the end you're polite and try to ask them questions to keep them involved.
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 14/15
Your style of writing is amazing. Grammar is perfect. Punctuation flawless. Characters are amazing. But seeing more detail for example describing the scene a little more would help readers paint a picture and feel like they are in the story. Aside from that. You're a great writer with a creative mind. Continue writing and work on the things I've pointed out.
• TOTAL : 90/100
Good job. If you have any questions you can pm me.
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