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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
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• COVER : 9/10
I love the cover it is well fitted for the story. It really suits and describe the whole story. With the girl and the fonts and choice of color. The only thing that confused me was the name because it was different with the author's username.
• TITLE : 8/10
I like the title. Simple yet straight to the point.
• BLURB : 9/10
It was precise, gave off some clues regarding the whole story but not giving too much detail. It had a mysterious vibe.
• CREATIVITY : 9/10
Kudos for this one. The creativity at the first chapter was amazing. Even the introduction of the characters gave us a glimpse of how they would be.
• PLOT : 14/15
The storyline was good. I can't say it was unique but it had justice and had it's own touch of originality. With how each character had their own colour and their blood depends on the color of their eyes was really well thought.
• CHARACTERS : 8/10
Each characters had their own crucial part in the story. But the main female character had a little bit of stiff personality (in my opinion) while the supporting female was just following the lead and seemed like a shadow. I was waiting for a major turn of events but nothing happened.
• GRAMMAR : 12/15
As the story's progression I saw the errors that wasn't noticeable, if you just read the story one time. It felt like it was rushed and wasn't well polished unlike the first few chapters.
• COMMUNICATION : 4/5
Author had tried everytime to reply to her reader's. She was very approachable and gave precise answer to the questions without spoiling the story.
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 13/15
I would binge read it if I had the time. The only problem was because every chapter was very descriptive it seemed long and as you reach the chapters near the ending you would feel like it was rushed unlike before. Also the ending really was a little bit disappointing, since it says the book was finished but the last scene seemed like it had a continuation and it came off as a little bit rushed unlike the first few chapters. Just work on the consistency of the story as much as possible. But all in all I would recommend this book. If you're into fantasy.
• TOTAL : 86/100
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