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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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⚫ COVER : 9/10
Your cover is nice, it is not entirely consistent with the outline of the story. Need improvement.
⚫ TITLE : 10/10
Title of the story fit well with the storyline. You did a amazing job.
⚫ BLURB : 8/10
Blurb was in two sentence. It was good but, it can't attract readers fully or can't grow interest towards your story. Try something unique and more similar.
⚫ CREATIVITY : 9/10
You are really creative. The way you describe your emotions through writing, I loved it. But, I think you can do better then this. You can put more emotions in your story.
⚫ PLOT : 14/15
Each every plots amused me so much. I love way you describe everything. But, there were some lack in plots, which is your plots were not so well arranged. So, you need to improve this.
⚫CHARACTERS : 7/10
I didn't found many characters. You can try to write something more interesting with adding more characters. It's a story of you so, you can add people from your life, like you can write something combined you and your friends or how is the realation between you and your friends or family. It will be good.
⚫ GRAMMAR : 12/15
Well written but, there were some tiny grammar mistakes you need to improve.
⚫ COMMUNICATION : 3/5
You didn't communicate your readers properly. Try to reply all comments.
⚫ OVERALL IMPRESSION : 14/15
There were some tiny mistake, I mentioned earlier, which need improvement. Otherwise, overall you did a good job. Keep it up.
⚫ TOTAL : 85/100
I hope my review will help you in your story. Best of luck.
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