ᒪIᗷᖇᗩᖇY ᖇᗴᐯIᗴᗯՏ 2.0

🔖 Courage And Cowardice

Author : PixiPages

Reviewer : Aesthetically_Lazy

• COVER : 10/10

It's an attractive cover but I would suggest you increase the size of the quote you have written because it cannot be read correctly. Other than that, it is a cute cover and would surely grab the attention of people.

• TITLE : 9/10

It's a good title and not very common either. I think I understand a little bit of how it relates to the story but not much. I would suggest you make it clear in your chapter.

• BLURB : 10/10

I like your blurb. It gives the correct amount of information and it is quite interesting. I would read this story if I was a reader looking for stories. Good job!

• CREATIVITY : 10/10

I liked the creativity. Your idea was unique and you had worked well with the artwork too. The descriptions of each scene were really precise and it almost pulled me into the story.

• CHARACTERS : 10/10

Your characters are complicated and I can imagine how hard it would be to write and understand them. But you did a pretty good job with it. You described all the characters well, especially the MC who has a lot of problems and issues to resolve. I liked this! Good job.

• PLOT : 13/15

I think your plot is a little slow. It's a good plot and it would be more attractive if you made it flow a little faster. I would suggest you work on this the most because everything else is just fine. It also gets a little boring at times which is dangerous because the readers won't stay if your story is boring (even a small part of it). I think you should pace things up a bit. Other than this, your plot is perfect.

• GRAMMAR : 15/15

I almost couldn't any grammar mistakes at all and the one point is only deducted for the punctuation errors and repeated phrases. You can just work on this in your final stages of editing.

• COMMUNICATION : 4/5

You have replied to every comment but not all of them. So just try to reply to every single comment because this shows your gratefulness towards the readers.

• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 13/15

It is a good story and it has great potential. Your work is pretty good. I would suggest that work on the chapters a little bit. Don't just share her thoughts. I think it's important to show dialogues and scenes too which is quite less in your chapters. Try to increase the length of the actual scenes. Other than that, this story has great potential.

• TOTAL : 94/100

Great job! If you have any questions, you can pm me.