🔖From Hais To Bestos To Sirim And Back

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Author : HebzidaDibblez

Reviewer : belkisaris

Reviewer : belkisaris

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COVER : 5/10

The cover is nice, but it could be easily skipped over by potential readers that may be looking for a brilliant story, which is a shame because your story has a lot to tell and it’s impressive.

TITLE : 10/10

Your title is impressively unique and is not something easy to do as usually every title is either duplicated or similar and you made yours unique and go well with the story.

BLURB : 2/10

The blurb is only two sentences people usually like a hint of what they are reading and you won't see a book out there with a two sentence blurb.
Trying to make a suspenseful blurb, giving a little more of what the story is about without telling.

PLOT : 15/15

The plot was impressive and unique. You had me hook through the chapters at a fast speed.

CREATIVITY : 10/10

I saw people commenting on similarities to other stories or movies but I didn’t see I think this is your unique story, something that hasn’t been done before.

CHARACTERS : 10/10

Characters are unique and nicely done.

GRAMMAR : 15 /15

Grammar and vocabulary was polished perfectly. It seems that an editor did it and I know it is not something easy to do.

COMMUNICATION : 5/5

You answer every single comment, even the ones that were for a book club. No one does that except keep it up.

OVERALL IMPRESSION : 15/15

I love your story and I am looking forward to continuing reading it and seeing where the ending leads.

TOTAL : 87/100

• TOTAL : 87/100

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