Author : Akgzero
Reviewer : milly_ellins
COVER : 8/10
TITLE : 9/10
BLURB : 9/10
CREATIVITY : 9/10
PLOT : 8/10
CHARACTERS : 7/10
GRAMMAR : 7/10
COMMUNICATION : 5/5
(With Readers)OVERALL IMPRESSION : 12/15
TOTAL : 74/100
Review :
The title really hooks the reader and is relatable to the plot. The graphics on the cover are nice, but doesn't seem to relate to the title. I like how you threw the reader right into the middle of the story without much explanation, as it leaves them wondering things that might be revealed later on, making them want to read on. The plot is unique and imaginative, also I like how it is in the point of view of a guy, as most books in first person are from the point of view of a girl, so your book immediately stands out. The descriptions are really good, and I love the humour you have added. Maybe go over the chapters and double check for spacings and missing words, as this occurs often. Overall, I think you have done a great job so far, so keep it up!
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