🔖 The Last Ninja

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Author : Charlie_Qualfoot

Reviewer :  IMAGINATED3434

Reviewer :  IMAGINATED3434

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COVER : 7/10

The cover is nice but I think if you worked on it a little more than I think it could have been better but good work!

TITLE : 9/10

The title is good but not enough to inspire readers to check your story out.

BLURB : 10/10

I think the blurb was done wonderfully done and it really covered everything that needed to be done.

CREATIVITY : 10/10

Well done with the creativity! I think creativity was great because the author wrote everything in a descriptive and unique way.

CHARACTERS : 10/10

The characters were so descriptive and amazing. They had me thinking that I was with them there.

PLOT : 14/15

The plot was well done but with somethings that were unnecessary but other than that it was okay.

GRAMMAR : 13/15

The grammar was also okay but I found few mistakes here and there.

COMMUNICATION : 2/5

You should really reply to comments and appreciations.

OVERALL IMPRESSION : 14/15

Overall it was great, as I said it was very descriptive. Though you should work on your plots and grammar.

TOTAL : 89/100

Good luck!

Good luck!

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⏰ Last updated: Sep 24, 2020 ⏰

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