🔖 Till It Happens

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Author : ritemise

Reviewer : srabonyislam

Reviewer : srabonyislam

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COVER : 7/10

Book cover is simple and beautiful. But, the font can be change. It's little fuzzy. I will suggest you to change the book cover.

TITLE : 8/10

Book title is cleverly chosen. As, I read 5 chapters of the book. I didn't found any thing fully connected with the story. But, I guess it will reflect the storyline with the flow of story.

BLURB : 10/10

Blurb is really interesting. Author describe so well, after reading the blurb it make me direct jump to the story. Author did a good job.

CREATIVITY : 10/10

Author is really creative without any doubt. Story is really interesting and unique. Plots were unique the way author described every plots it was interesting and well described.

PLOT : 13/15

As I say before, plots are interesting and unique. Author is really good with the description. All plots described well. There were some things I want to suggest author, if you are writing a Flashback then after finishing the flashback do mention Flashback End. If you are writing someone's pov after finishing his/her pov do mention it ends with who's pov is next or the one certain person who is telling the stroy I mean, if you are write Mel's POV after finishing her POV you can write Anisha's POV or who's POV is next. I know you used signs but, it will be better if you mentioned all this.

CHARACTERS : 10/10

All characters are perfectly described. Love the way, author described all characters information.

GRAMMAR : 13/15

There were some tiny grammatical mistakes that need to be correct. Also you can use better vocabulary. It's good for your story.

COMMUNICATION : 5/5 

Author replied all comments.

OVERALL IMPRESSION : 14/15

I love the book. I really enjoyed the story while reading. This book made me cry. So well described book. Author you really did a good job. I love your book. There were some tiny mistakes, I mentioned earlier that need to be correct.

TOTAL : 90/100

I hope my review will help you in your story. Best of luck.

 Best of luck

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