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🔖 Breed And Burn: Faceless

Author : aryablayne

Reviewer : belkisaris

• COVER : 10/10

Your cover is really impressive. Usually when I look at a cover, I like to stare at it then move on. I kept going back to look at yours. It intrigued me. I am not sure if you use a picture on the internet and work on the cover to make it perfect, or if someone did it for you, but it is a magnificent job! I could see that type of cover attracting a lot of new readers.

• TITLE : 10/10

Your title is unique. I can honestly tell you I haven’t read another title like yours, and just to be safe to call it unique, I looked in Wattpad. Titles are really hard to do and it’s almost impossible to come up with an unique one as every story has something similar with others and you found a way to keep everything about your
story unique and yours. Great Job!

• BLURB : 10/10

When I first saw your blurb I started thinking that it was too long. I started to read the first paragraph just to get a feel and see where you went wrong. I was proven wrong. From the moment I started to read your blurb I was pulled into the description of what the story is and you kept it a mystery giving potential readers just enough to spike interest. Very professionally done.

• CREATIVITY : 10/10

Just like I said with the title stories tend to be similar to each other and you manage to make yours unique and yours. It takes a lot of creativity to keep each chapter and a whole story unique and you did that. I can see a great writer in you.

• PLOT : 15/15

Your plot is unique and interesting. And I wouldn’t be surprised if I see your book being made into a movie for Netflix in the future, just like some book on Wattpad has been made. I am not a fan of horror unless it involves zombies or vampires, and yours is right on the list of my favorite plots.

• CHARACTERS : 10/10

I love your characters. They were not rushed and were perfectly developed, but my favorite one is Axel. I think it is because he’s the main character, but there’s something about him that I like.

• GRAMMAR : 15/15

Not only was your grammar polished and perfect, almost looking like a professional editor did it, but your description was out of this world and very vivid. There were a lot of comments that said so, and I agree with every single one of them.

• COMMUNICATION : 3/5

I saw that the important comments not only acknowledge you but you let the reader know how much you appreciated, but there were some chapters that were left silent. I am not sure if you missed them or you read them but didn’t feel the need to say something. I would suggest if it’s the same person commenting over and over again just respond to one or two so you built a relationship with your reader. There’s nothing greater than having a loyal reader that feels appreciated. They stay with you forever.

• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 15/15

Your story is amazing, I have fallen in love with it since the first chapter. Usually for that type of love to develop I have read two or three chapters but yours grab me from the very beginning like I have been saying all over this review you are a very talented writer and I will definitely come back and finish the series once I have time to sit down and enjoy a great book, before your books makes it into a movie :)

• TOTAL : 98/100