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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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• COVER : 10/10
I can't express how much I love this cover. It is very well done and calling. I am pretty sure no one that finds such cover while surfing in Wattpad would pass it. Usually big letters on a cover distract from it and make the cover bad, but you found a way where it works, something that's difficult to pull off such a superb job!
• TITLE :10/10
Just like with the cover the title is unique and intriguing I am pretty sure future readers would like to find out what the story is about. Another superb job!
• BLURB : 10/10
Your blurb looks professionally done. I felt like I bought a book and was reading the blurb of the book. This is another thing that's hard to pull off and you nailed it. Great Job!
• CREATIVITY : 10/10
Although the story is about humans vs witches and there are a lot of similar stories out there yours is unique. The only time I felt like I have read this before was in the prologue, but usually all great stories start with a great tragedy and you manage to make yours unique once again that's not easy to pull off.
• PLOT : 15/15
I love the plot from the moment I started reading the book. I found myself letting myself read one more time to get the gist of the story and I can tell this is going to be a roller coaster of great action, sadness, love etc. I will definitely will be reading more when I have more free time.
• CHARACTERS : 10/10
Your characters are well thought of and developed nicely. We can see Abyss thinking like a six-year-old in the prologue and how she evolved into a young lady and although hate should be in her heart she's neutral but fearful. I haven't read much about her and she's already one of my favorite characters.
• GRAMMAR : 15/15
The grammar was polished and perfect. The person that has been helping you edit has done a great job. Your description is vivid and almost like a poem, which I love.
• COMMUNICATION : 5/5
You are consistent with answering each and every comment of your readers. Never lose that getting a response from a writer is like having your favorite actor respond to an email we love that and feel like the time spent on a book is appreciated.
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 15/15
You should be proud of this book, you have a perfect score and it's well deserved. Writing a book is hard work, and it looks like you have put time and effort to make this story perfect so keep up the great work.
• TOTAL : 100/100
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