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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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• COVER : 10/10
I love the cover. It was brilliantly done, almost professional looking. Cover’s are the first things readers judge and for the looks of yours I have no doubt that if they scroll and see your book, they’ll click on it and read your amazing poems.
• TITLE : 10/10
Not only I love the title, but it is mesmerizing and so true. I could tell it wasn’t something from the first thing that came to your mind. It looks like you thought hard and long for an impressive title and you managed it.
• BLURB : 8/10
I think the blurb is good as it is, but it might lose some potential readers. I would suggest trying to add a little more mystery in the first sentence instead of telling what the poems are about. Writing something like the poems you wrote makes it sexy and intriguing, so everyone that comes across this amazing book will click on it. I love the last part and how you let potential readers know that you respond and honor every reader. Outstanding job!
• FIRST POEM : 10/10
The first poem is impressive and sexy and is honestly one of my favorite poems from your book.
• GRAMMAR : 10/10
The grammar in your poem book was outstanding. Grammar is one of the harder things to work on and you did an amazing job in edits.
• CREATIVITY : 10/10
Poems are hard to do, they all don’t have to rhyme, but they have to make sense and usually make the readers feel something and you did that. You are a very creative poet. Keep it up!
• STYLE/FLOW : 10/10
I love the style and flow of your poems, although they were unique and different from other poems that I have read. It works.
• READER INVOLVEMENT : 5/5
Marvellous job with readers' involvement. By the time I reached chapter 10 I was in love and will definitely continue to read your poems as you update.
• COMMUNICATION : 5/5
Just like you promised on your blurb, you answered every single comment and I could see some relationship building with your readers. Never lose that.
• TOTAL : 98/100
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