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🔖 The Heart Donor

Author : Geegervy

Reviewer : Aesthetically_Lazy

• COVER : 10/10

I love it! The fonts are perfect, and everything is great. Although, I do believe that your cover prior to this was great too! Anyways, good job with this one! :)

• TITLE : 10/10

Accurate title. I knew this story would be good, just by looking at the title and the cover.  It's catchy and fits the story perfectly! Good job again :)

• BLURB : 10/10

I love it! It had me hooked. I would definitely read this book after just reading the blurb!

• CREATIVITY : 9/10

It was pretty darn creative. Like Madison (the fiancee) dies but saves Lucy! Woah! That was cool. And Madison's heart beating in Lucy's chest. Everything was so unique and so beautifully planned. I deducted one point just because of some of the cliche scenes, but we all love cliche so you don't have to change anything in that.

• CHARACTERS : 8/10

I adore Lucy. She is relatable and there are many parts where she thinks, acts, and talks like a person I know XD. Overall, you've constructed her character really well. 

You also worked on Marc pretty well. But sometimes he just seems a little inhuman. Maybe you can describe his body language better. Like fiddling with his fingers and thousands of emotions passing through his eyes. Something that will bring him to life.

• PLOT : 13/15

I think your story is pretty much perfect! I loved reading this book and I'll continue reading this apart from the reviews! The plot was really good. It seemed that you really worked hard and put your heart and soul into this project. Your chapters are a little short though. I believe that every chapter should have at least 1500 words or more because it hooks the reader in the story. But you also update often so it's not a huge problem!

• GRAMMAR : 13/15

Very few grammatical errors. You just had a few typos and punctuation mistakes here and there. But you can just edit the chapters after you finish the book and then you'll be fine. Also, I think you can use better vocabulary too and you've repeated a few phrases over and over again in a few sentences, so just change that when you're editing.

• COMMUNICATION : 5/5

You replied to each and every comment which I really admired. Great job!

• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 14/15

There are some books where just by looking at the cover or reading the description, you know it will be a good book. And this was one of them. It was almost close to perfect. Just a few grammar mistakes and plot holes. Really, great job! The one point was literally deducted because of the grammar mistakes and all.

• TOTAL : 92/100

Great book! If you have any questions, you can pm me! :)