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🔖 Lost Eden

Author : Bluelovesleep

Reviewer : belkisaris

• COVER : 9/10

I love the cover, but I couldn't see the connection with the story. I only read four chapters for the review and I know that's not enough to compare it with the plot as I am sure it will become clear in the later chapters. I think the cover is bright and intriguing and people will be curious by it.

• TITLE : 9/10

I have the same impression with the title I didn't see the connection with the story, but I know the title is unique and I haven't seen it anywhere in wattpad and just like with the cover I am sure it will make sense with the stories in the later chapter. You did an outstanding job with the title. People will be drawn and curious about it.

• BLURB : 5/10

I think the blurb it's too short. You need to add more to describe the story without going into details. What makes your story different from the rest? Why should readers check it out? Etc with a blurb like that people may just be turned off by it and continue to look for something else which would be a shame as you have an amazing story in your hands.

• CREATIVITY : 10/10

I love your creativity. I am a supernatural fan and I can assure you I haven't read a story quite like yours. Great job is not easy to come up with a unique story no one else has or that has some similarities with stories of the same genre.

• PLOT : 15/15

Just like with the creativity your plot is unique and different. I haven't seen a plot about finding a lost Eden and I am curious to find out more about the plot to see if it's possible and where the plot will lead.

• CHARACTERS : 10/10

In four chapters it's hard to see characters developed, but not only I could see you did a great job, I could see the changes in the characters already and I could see it was something that was well thought out and they will grow in the later chapters.

• GRAMMAR : 15/15

You did an amazing job with grammar and I saw as well that you have someone double checking your chapters, magnificent job!

• COMMUNICATION : 5/5

You did an amazing job communicating with your readers, not only you answer every single comment you went above and beyond by dedicating a chapter to the most devoted fan I was impressed and move and hoping that when your book is famous and you get a lot of comments daily you don't lose that :)

• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 15/15

I am amazed and intrigued by your story and the only reason I didn't finish reading all the chapters you have so far is because my internet is not doing so good right now, but be sure that once I am back online and a little less busy, I will continue to read your story. You have an amazing story here and you should be proud of it.

• TOTAL : 93/100