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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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• COVER: 10/10
The cover fits the exact same scene from the character's stand point and it's good enough for the story.
• TITLE : 10/10
The title was just one word. Simple and yet it portrayed what the story was about.
• BLURB : 9/10
Hmm, the blurb seems to play on emotions instead of the story itself. As it focused on a few moments of the characters life, it was well phrased.
• CREATIVITY : 10/10
The creativity was there and it was very good, however, I kind of fear the image the story is trying to get across.
• PLOT : 12/15
It doesn't really have much of a plot; or rather, a simple one, but it was well laid out and really touching.
• CHARACTERS : 10/15
What I really appreciated was the way you portrayed the kind of person your main character was without going into a long monologue of unnecessary detail. You even managed to draw out the emotion here and it was exquisite.
• GRAMMAR : 15/15
I rarely see this and I really appreciate the fact that your grammar was just perfect. From your choice of words down to the littlest details with punctuation. This was well written and it was a smooth read.
• COMMUNICATION : 5/5
I have never actually seen a reader give so many comments within a single chapter and to be honest, it's a bit alarming for me. I could have sworn I saw over thirty from a single user.
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 13/15
I know the main character went through a really disturbing experience and it was a touching read, and it showed some insight on what happens in some people's lives.
• TOTAL : 94/100
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