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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
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• COVER : 5/10
A cover in my opinion should have some kind of connection with the book but i don't see how the title connects with the book. Also,the title is jam-packed together and the word is kind of long so it should at least have a bit more spacing so it would be easy to read at a glance because no one will spend 30seconds trying to read a title that is jam-packed. I sure know I won't! There is also another word written on the cover and it is written in white which causes a blend between the cover and the words because cream and white are both light colours.
• TITLE : 10/10
The title is in form of a question which in my opinion is a very good concept because it generates interest in a readers mind which is exactly what we want.
• BLURB : 10/10
The blurb is fantastic. It gives the perfect amount of detail and it is captivating.
• CREATIVITY : 10/10
Your creativity is perfect! I love it. It is amazing. It is superb. It's a 101%. It's really original and I have never come across this type of plot setting before. What blew my mind the most is the fact that you included poetry into your writing so it is like a two in one package for someone who loves to read and who loves poetry as well, when I start a new chapter I always look forward to the poem and I'm like 'where's the poem! where's the poem!'. Absolutely mind blowing, I loved it.
• PLOT : 9/15
The plot is really unique and lovely except for a few things. I think the plot is only centered on her finding the death of her sister, you can add a little bit of diversion maybe a flashback on her sister life so we can know better about her or maybe a little vacation she goes on or something. And the chemistry between Ace and Kendall is a little bit too fast I mean they just met and they were about to kiss and she blabbed out all that has been going on in her life the same day she met him and could not even tell her friends or family about it. I think it's a bit ridiculous.
• CHARACTER : 7/10
The character is okay but the visual representation is a little bit poor in the sense that we don't know what colour her hair is, what height she is, the colour of her eyes and stuff like that. It is not compulsory you add them but I think I would make your book have better visual representation of the characters.
• GRAMMAR : 15/15
The grammar is perfect.
• COMMUNICATION : 5/5
All of the questions are answered.
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 13/15
I love it, it's a really good book. You all should read it!
• TOTAL : 84/100
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