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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
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🌼 COVER : 6/10
You book cover is beautiful but it doesn't match with the story. When I first saw you book, I thought the story is about wild tribes of Africa or any other native country. Which means, you book covet doesn't give the vampire/werewolf vibe. Book cover has to show what the story is about. For a vampire/werewolf genre lover like me, it can attract many readers if you book shows a very rouch sketch of th story.
🌼 TITLE : 10/10
Title goes very well with the story and the plots.
🌼 BLURB : 8/10
Blurb is good. And, leaves a lota to wonder. But, in my opinion, it can be improved. See, the blurb is quite lengthy. You can improve it by writing a small blurb with enough information.
🌼 CREATIVITY : 8/10
Your writing style is good, I really liked it. Plots are very interesting and intriguing. But, in my opinion few scenes needed more description. Like, Kwami's pack destruction, why her wolf was gone, why did the little girl heard her thoughts etc. I also liked how you explained Kwami's emotions.
🌼 PLOT : 14/15
Plots are very good. It really intrigued me to read more. But, like I said, few scenes needed a bit more details.
🌼 CHARACTERS : 9/10
Characters are good. I really loved Kwami's character. It was really amazing. But, for more neatness in your book, better giving a list of the characters with a bit of information about them. It's easier of readers to understand who is who, with a well arranged characters description/list. And, if you don't want to give a list of characters, you have to describe every character more.
🌼 GRAMMAR : 15/15
There are no grammatical error.
🌼 COMMUNICATION : 5/5
Replied every comment.
🌼 OVERALL IMPRESSION : 12/15
Overall, it's very interesting. Well written. Page layout is very good. There are no errors or grammatical or punctuation mistake. It's neatly arranged. I really loved the book.
🌼 TOTAL : 87/100
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