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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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• COVER : 5/10
I think your biggest problem is the size of the cover (or maybe the position of the writing) but I'd suggest you get that fixed, it's what'll differentiate your book from thousands of others. I like the colour scheme, however, The image isn't very clear. The font is good but not visible so I suggest you change that too!
• TITLE : 7/10
I love the personification of the tittle! It's very interesting but i also think it plays with the tongue and sounds grammatically incorrect. I think it should be "tales" but I'm not one hundred percent sure.
• BLURB : 4/10
One of the biggest mistakes poets on Wattpad make! They forget to write a proper blurb. Yes I know they are poems, that doesn't mean you can't include a little sample of your work, or a summary, or what your poems are themed upon. When the book has no blurb, it makes the poet look like an amateur.
• FIRST POEM : 7/10
It's an absolute pleasure to read! Almost like a tale! I really liked it, but it needs a bit of work done one structure, word choice and grammar.
• MESSAGE : 9/10
This message was a beautiful one! A twist in fairytales I'd say. You're word choice really conveyed the massage clearly, as well as intricately.
• GRAMMAR : 6/10
You shouldn't be about your grammar, but more about your punctuation. You are missing punctuation in some areas and some areas have too many. I really suggest you look over and read again or find a beta reader, whatever suits you best!
• CREATIVITY : 8/10
You are indeed creative! I love the twists, they almost stand as plot twist in the tale.
• STYLE/FLOW : 6/10
You're structure has great effect on flow, you don't really have a structure, which does effect your writing. I suggest stanzas of four, five or eight in this poem.
• READER'S INVOLVEMENT : 10/10
Impeccable reader involvement!
• COMMUNICATION : 4/5
You're communication is great! What I find really helpful, to explain a poem at the end of the chapter, you might want to try it out!
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 7/10
Like I said, you're message is beautiful, just a bit of work on punctuation and you'll be a star! Well done!
• TOTAL : 73/100
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