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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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• COVER : 10/10
The cover is just fantastic. The background and focusing picture just really made me interested to read the story. The fonts are great!
• TITLE : 9/10
The title is good but I think you could have done better with the title.
• BLURB : 10/10
The blurb at first made it more interested to read it because it gave out a vibe of an Indian version of Romeo and Juliet, which for me was very interesting. Good job
• CREATIVITY : 9/10
Creativity was good. At first I thought that It would be a cliche of Romeo and Juliet but It was so much more. Once again good job!
• CHARACTERS : 8/10
Nehali Singh was amazing. I loved that she wasn't a cliche like she wasn't just sad or the happiest girl. She had her flaws and loved her sarcasm. Basheer Sheikh was also amazing but I think his character could have been stronger. Though overall both were amazing.
• PLOT : 13/15
I thought it was a bit of a cliche that they were enemies and they fell in love but the construction was good.
• GRAMMAR : 14/15
Your grammatical mistakes were slim to none but I think if you continue writing for a while you will improve!
• COMMUNICATION : 4/5
I saw that you replied to some but most were not replied. You should reply to comments more.
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 14/15
I thought it was amazing. The story, the character building and specially loved how you described everything. Everything was the perfect balance and I think if you practice and continue writing then it will become even better. Best of Luck!
• TOTAL : 90/100
Great book and Good luck!
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