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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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🌼 COVER : 10/10
The book cover is really very beautiful. It's really attractive. It gives the mysterious vive of the story which is amazing.
🌼 TITLE : 8/10
Your title is a subtle one. Honestly, I didn't get what the story is about when I read the title. It's very confusing. But, reading through the book, it seems that the title goes ok with the story. But, you could use other titles that can easily draw attention of the readers.
🌼 BLURB : 7/10
You blurb is very small. Well, it's not a problem till it shows some interesting part or plots of the story. Your blurb needs to be more intriguing and more attention seeking. It have to contain the mejor theme of the story.
🌼 CREATIVITY : 7/10
Author you're very creative. It's hard to write a story just with your imagination. It takes a lot of effort. But, you have to write every scenes with the flow and not out of nowhere. You have to explain everything so that the story feels real. Almost as if you're the one experiencing the things happening in the story.
🌼 PLOT : 12/15
Reading throughout the book, your plots seemed really interesting. But, as I mentioned before, you have to write with the flow. Most of the scenes are very rushed. Your plots needs to be described more.
🌼 CHARACTERS : 7/10
Your characters misses description. About any book, the thing that attracts the readers, are the characters. A book that has a well described characters, can make the book more enjoyable to the readers. You need to describe every little detail about the characters, especially the main protagonists. Better making a list of the characters, with a bit of description about them. You can add a chapter at the very start of the story containing the characters (title: Characters) and throughout the story you can describe them more.
🌼 GRAMMAR : 12/15
Your grammar is good. Spellings are also good. But, you missed loads of punctuation marks. You need to be careful about using the correct punctuations and where to use them.
🌼 COMMUNICATION : 5/5
There's hardly any comment throughout your book. And, you replied every single one. Great job.
🌼 OVERALL IMPRESSION : 11/15
Your book is interesting. Notice the things I pointed out and keep writing good stories.
🌼 TOTAL : 79/100
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