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''ᴇᴠᴇʀyᴏɴᴇ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀ, ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴛᴇɴ ɪɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ꜱᴏᴍᴇ ᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜰɪɴᴇᴅ ᴛᴏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛꜱ.''
- ꜱᴀᴠɪ ꜱʜᴀʀᴍᴀ
We invest our best into writing but at times, the outcome we receive is below our expectations. This could...
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• COVER : 3/10
The picture isn't very clear, and should be something recognisable. The fonts aren't great they should be bigger and not cursive. Your username is not on there that should be added. The cover isn't reader attracting or doesn't grab attention.
• TITLE : 10/10
The title intrigued me to read further. Your title matched the blurb and genre of the book. The title is perfect!
• BLURB : 10/10
The blurb was amazing! It told me a lot about the story. It was horror definitely by the way the blurb was written. The blurb doesn't give too much away but just enough for me to want to read more.
• CREATIVITY : 10/10
This book was very creative! All the characters were intricate and complicated. The prologue was stunning and it was very suspenseful. The whole idea of a character from a manuscript coming to life is a very good idea. The story was interesting, just make sure there aren't too many descriptions, I noticed there's way to many of them.
• CHARACTERS : 8/10
I loved Evelyn she was a likable and relatable character that I connected with easily. I had a good picture of her in my head. I liked Gideon he seemed like a mysterious character that I wanted to know more about. Her grandmother was very calm, maybe a bit to calm. Characters were all creative. I was hoping there would be more descriptions on what they looked like. I also would've liked more dialogue, otherwise the characters were great.
• PLOT : 13/15
The plot is interesting, the story is very original and I found it easy to read. This seemed like an average horror story.
• GRAMMAR : 14/15
There are little to no errors. I couldn't find many grammatical errors throughout! There were only a few places where a comma is needed, with a simple proofread those few errors can be fixed.
• OVERALL IMPRESSION : 14/15
This story made a big impression on me! I had a good time reading this. If you lighten up the descriptions this book can be great!
• TOTAL : 82/100
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