Elephant Reviews [CFCU]

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By: Myrules_

First Impressions (ex. Cover, blurb, title)

Title: The title is good because it is the name of the school.

Cover: The cover is eye catching, but the words at the bottom are a little stretched.

Blurb: The blurb is creative, but maybe a summary can be added, to preview the story.

Mechanics (ex. Grammar, sentence structure, etc.)

We notice that sometimes the narrative isn't completely easy to understand, and we feel finding a native speaker as an editor would help with this issue.

Plot: The story is interesting and has a lot of mysteries that are forming. Maybe it will be good to add a little more descriptions to help the reader understand what the characters are going through.

Characters:The dynamic between the three friends, Damian, Marie, and Dayanne is good, there is good humor between them.

The way you end the chapters is very good, it is suspenseful and makes you want to know what happens next. Best wishes for your story!