Elephant Reviews [CFCU]

Touch

By: JaxCreation

First Impressions (ex. Cover, blurb, title)

-Title: The title seems fitting.

-Cover: The cover is nice.

-Blurb: The blurb works well.

Mechanics (ex. Grammar, sentence structure, etc.)

There does not seem to be any grammar issues.

Plot

- The dialogue in the first chapter seems to hold a lot of exposition.

- It was interesting that Evelyn was a social outcast simply because of her insights.

The following statements reflect Ellie's option:

- There's great suspense and intense action- I was sitting at the edge of my seat.

- I enjoyed the repetition in the lines about cleverness in chapter two.

- Also in chapter two, there was a good balance of stories from the past, and what was going on in the present.

- The main character seems to be a good balance of emotional and logical, with the dry sense of humor.

This is an interesting story with well built, suspenseful scenes. We wish you best of luck on your writing journey!