Elephant Reviews [CFCU]

To Kill A God

By: OddityOdyssey

First Impressions (ex. Cover, blurb, title) 

-Title: The title seems fitting 

-Cover: The cover is simple yet effective, but vague. Some suggestions might be to include a person or greek mythology motifs.

 -Blurb: The blurb covers the basics.

Mechanics (ex. Grammar, sentence structure, etc.)

-There seems to be no issues with the grammar. 

-Set up and world building might be helpful for the reader to understand the context. For example, it is not addressed as to why the gods are dead or who killed them or how.

Plot: 

It's strange that she is working with gods and they cannot do anything for her disability.  Perhaps if there is a limitation to the god's ability to heal it or something preventing that from happening, it would be good if there was some acknowledgment to the question of "Why can't the gods heal her?"

Characters 

- The characters are interesting, but there was some confusion as to who was who, so maybe more of an introduction or background on the characters would be beneficial, even if it might be sort of obvious for most. For example, when she first sees the gods, it could be like, "Dionysus? The god of festivities?"

- The news was dropped on her that she was to succeed the throne, and that she was to come back to train. There wasn't much of a reaction or emotion that followed, so it seemed a little sudden when the chapter ends there. 

With some clarification and world building, this sounds like a neat mythology story. Best of luck!