Elephant Reviews [CFCU]

Whatever Souls Are Made Of

By:  italychick

First Impressions (ex. Cover, blurb, title)

-Title: The title is good.

-Cover: The cover is nicely done.

-Blurb: The blurb works.

Mechanics (ex. Grammar, sentence structure, etc.)

The grammar is pretty flawless.

Plot & Characters

- Since there are a lot of character introductions in the second chapter, it is a little difficult to keep track of who everyone is, who likes who, and why.

- In chapter eight, there's a mention of gaining a deeper understanding of Camp David accords but the doesn't seem to be much of an explanation as to what that is or why this is important to her. If there was an explanation before, perhaps it's a good idea to reintroduce some of the context to remind readers.

The prose is well written and easily readable. It seems like a neat story in the works, we wish you the best of luck in your writing journey!