Elephant Reviews [CFCU]

Not Cupid's Proxy

By: Rain_Faiiry_Unicorn

First Impressions (ex. Cover, blurb, title) 

-Title: The title seems fine.

 -Cover: It's a little difficult to see the words, because there's not that much contrast and the cursive is a little hard to make out, especially when it's on the smaller side like the subtitle. 

-Blurb: The blurb covers all of the essentials.

Mechanics (ex. Grammar, sentence structure, etc.)

-The grammar seems to be without too many errors. -One suggestion would be to add more detail in between dialogue

Plot

So far, the story seems to be moving at a good pace and the setup of the situation is going well.

Characters

The characters that have been introduced are charismatic, and it will be interesting to see their development.

There's not much to say as it is still relatively early on, but this is a good start to a story that has potential. Good luck with your story!