Elephant Reviews [CFCU]

Perfect Girls Don't Cry

By: By lilzy_

First Impressions (ex. Cover, blurb, title)

-Title: The title is good.

-Cover: The cover is fine.

-Blurb: Perhaps the blurb can use a little work, as it seems a bit disorganized.

Mechanics (ex. Grammar, sentence structure, etc.)

There doesn't seem to be any apparent errors.

Plot & Characters:

- This story seems to be a solid teen fic, but it is a little generic. It's not bad, but doesn't stand out too much, at least in the beginning.

-Some of the characters seem more developed, such as the main character and Valencia, but some of the characters seem to fit a more ridged cliche.

-This story features some emotional scenes with great displays of emotion.

This is some solid writing and a good start. We wish you the best on your writing journey!