The Kitty Cat's Mates {BoyxBoy}

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By: psychobott

First Impressions (ex. Cover, blurb, title)

-Title: The title is fine.

-Cover: The cover is very nice, but the author's name and the subtitle is a little bit difficult to read.

-Blurb: The blurb is good.

Mechanics (ex. Grammar, sentence structure, etc.)

The grammar is pretty good, but there are a couple typos spotted.

Plot & Characters

- There is not much set up to provide readers with context. Where are they going and why? Who exactly are these characters? We know who they are in relationship to each other, but what role do they play in the story?

- One suggestion would be to keep an eye on the level of swearing. While some swearing is fine, too much can become excessive.


It will be interesting to see where this story goes. There is some excellent imagery and the chapters end on good lines. Wishing you the best in your writing journey!

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