Elephant Reviews [CFCU]

Angel

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First Impressions: (Cover, Blurb, Title)

-The cover is nice and attractive, but the subtitle is a little hard to read.

-The blurb is great, especially for a short story. It provides just the right amount of context and interest without saying it all.

-Title- The title is fitting, it works. But it is also very common.

Mechanics (Grammar, sentence structure)

-There weren't any problems spotted, and the language is eloquent and fits the tone well.

-At the beginning the writing style felt different from the rest of the story

Plot:

-Great story, nicely executed. There was excellent imagery and just the right amount narration to capture the contrast of good and evil.

-Some questions that came up were, Does she know she's an angel? Why does she always end up dating a demon, they seek her out specifically?

-It had a beginning, middle, and end, which is sometimes difficult for the short story genre to accomplish.

-The length was just right and the pacing felt good, with anticipation and action hitting all the right notes.

-It was easy to imagine and follow along with despite the sometimes more challenging vocabulary.

Overall fantastic job. Even with some inconsistencies, it was a great story. Best wishes!