Elephant Reviews [CFCU]

The Billionaire's Billionaire

By Chogiwhynot

First Impressions (ex. Cover, blurb, title)

-Cover: The cover looks great.

-Blurb: The blurb works.

-Title: The title is good.

Mechanics (ex. Grammar, sentence structure, etc.)

There are minimal typos or grammar issues, if any.

Plot & Characters

-This story was interesting because one of us liked the humor but the other not as much. She found it a bit hit or miss. Personally, I liked the story and read it cover to cover in one sitting.

- A couple suggestions would be to limit the "he sighed in x language" line a little bit to avoid too much repetition or to deepen the plot or include more serious moments.

We're sorry we couldn't come up with more concrete constructive criticism but we wish you luck on your writing journey.