Ohana Reviews

Review- Tale of Future Gods

Reviewer- kinalhariya
Book- Tale of future Gods(chapter 9-19)
Author- SohanMungekar

Moving directly to the chapters,

A deer made of crystal..I can imagine it to be really beautiful.

Tenses changed, but it wouldn't look good otherwise. So maybe make it look like it is his thoughts. Then the fluctuating tense wouldn't pose a problem.

The ability of the masked woman was amazing. Although she was an enemy, I couldn't help but get awed by the way she fought.

I wasn't really expecting it, but loved the way Miss Maya put Vince into his place.

The jealous girls were a sight to see. Sabastian is a very keen observer.

I like how they aren't ruling anyone out of suspicion. Any mistake can be fatal.

I like how Miss Lily didn't take offense and readily agreed for the safety of students.

Something seems to be brewing among Shaun and Nina. Feel bad for Shaun's girlfriend.

Natasha was on fire. It was amusing to see Shaun get scared and his friends provoking Natasha more and more.

Why do I have a suspicion that Temia is related to that masked man and woman?? Let's see if my assumption comes true.

The fight between the girls for Shaun was funny. They were both fighting for his love.

One thing I noticed is that Shaun called Natasha his friend in his mind, and not his girlfriend. I assume it is some foreshadowing.

Neil gathering every single guy of the class against Shaun was hilarious. Death penalty and leader of single men...amazingly thought. However I am surprised that one of his best friends also turned against him.

If the element of darkness is expelled then how come Temia's region has few of those? The way the element of darkness is portrayed, banned, it doesn't make sense for her to outrightly & freely say that there are such people there in her region, even if they have given them shelter.

Apart from that minor issue, the whole story about Gods was nicely described. And students discussing it after the explanation and creating their own theories was relatable and interesting.

Another doubt/minor plot hole:
The whole conversation of Gods came up because Temia said there were ten elements. But now Miss Maya asked if there were more, and there came Temia's own other element. If that was the case then why did she just say only about the ten elements first.

'A woman who cannot cook is not a woman at all.'→Although this dialogue boils my blood, it nicely shows one of Natasha's character traits. Andddd even Scarlett's. I thought cooking was a basic life skill, but here it is like an identity of a perfect woman and a wife.

I wonder what charm Shaun has that every single girl in the story is trying to make him taste their food. Since the last two chapters I feel that every girl is unnaturally getting close to him, unlike the genuine friendship that was shown in earlier chapters.

The way Shaun's mother changed her behaviour after finding out that Temia was a princess. This was a perfect way to show how money and power can change someone.

My guess was totally wrong about Temia. The twist was unpredictable and really floored me. Awesome work done.

His dreams were finally explained and the title made its way. Future God...However title has plural Gods, wonder who all would be the other future Gods. Nicely described.