Reviewer: doggx_
Book: H E L L S I X
Author: Xaprith
Title: The way you show creativity on the title is great! Your title really explains a lot about the book, which made me very interested in your book. The problem is, I can't seem to search for the book because Wattpad thought that the book is nonexistent. (3/5)
Plot: I loved the plot very much! It is great and unique! It was creative too! But I had a hard time understanding the plot, which is good for readers who want an interesting plot. (25/25)
Blurb: The blurb is great! For advanced readers. I would say that I really love how you show and not tell, not like how I wrote my book (I am still learning) The blurb was really confusing and doesn't get me hooked to read the book, and I also don't know anything about the book, so the blurb is usually used for a small introduction about the characters and the book. (6/10)
Engagement: The plot was great! And I really enjoyed reading it! But it was too long and felt like a real book. Wattpad does recommend books around 2000 words or more if needed, but they also said that you could try to make it shorter because lots of readers read it on the go and lots of them are mobile readers. I tried reading it on my phone but it got me bored very quickly. (4/10)
Grammar: Just absolutely marvelous! I really didn't see any grammar mistakes! (15/15)
Vocabulary: You used the vocabulary when you needed to and it was great! I read some of the comments and noticed that you used too many adjectives thanks to a user commenting it out, and I really agree with him/her. (8/10)
Character: There was a chapter dedicated to the characters, and I could see that you made those characters. There were posters and some of them used Art breeder. (10/10)
Writing Style: Great! Just great! I have no words and wouldn't judge it. Feels like a real book! But you could shorten it because it is Wattpad. That's all! (9/10)
Cover: The cover was so great and I know that it took a long time to make it! (5/5)
Overall: I really loved how you wrote it, the characters, grammar, and vocabulary. It is maybe a bit of a personal problem and not about the book, is that since it was my first time reading cyberpunk/science fiction book genres, I was having a hard time reviewing your book. It may be because of how long the book is and it was still ongoing.
Total:85/100
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