Reviewer Juleove
Division 57: Our Life Inside by mmjayoh
Title: It goes well with the blurb and is simple enough to remember. (5/5)
Cover: I don’t know whether I should look at the eye or the map. (3/5)
Blurb: Tells us what the story is about and even warns you of violence, language, and things that may trigger some. (5/5)
Hook: Like the comparison here. (5/5)
Grammar: There doesn't seem to be any grammar errors in these first three chapters so kudos. (10/10)
Spelling: I didn't catch any spelling errors. (10/10)
Flow: The story flows really well. (10/10)
Enjoyment: I'm curious to see what's in store for EJ and Harlow. (10/10)
Total: (58/60)
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