Review 🐠 Everett

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Reveiwer Juleove

Everett by violetsadowski

Again I'm really sorry for the delay here's your review :)

Title: It's simple and to the point, I like it. (5/5)

Cover: It's good but feels like there's a lot of empty space. (4/5)

Blurb: Tells us exactly what the story is about without giving too much away. (5/5)

Hook: I really love the description and can really picture scene. (5/5)

Grammar: There was a few run-on sentences here and there but nothing too major. (9/10)

Spelling: I didn't catch anything misspelled so great job there. (10/10)

Flow: The structure flowed really well. (10/10)

Enjoyment: Yes I liked the story and really feel for Everett. (10/10)

Total: (58/60)

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