Review ~ Evanesce

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Evanesce by  Moonwrites_11

reviewer: kailucy


So sorry it took forever. I hope you like the review.


Cover:

The cover is beautiful. The fonts look amazing and complement the image perfectly. The color scheme is great as well.

Title:

I love the title. It fits the theme of the poems nicely and it's memorable.

Overall:

Overall, this was an amazing collection of poetry. I loved that all the titles had a similar theme, which was flowers. They each had a great flow and an expansive vocabulary. Your starting sentences were always great and your conclusions were even better.

Thoughts on individual poems:

Usually, I pick a few that really stood out to me but since there were only five I decided just to write a little bit for all of them.

Dandelion:A wonderful start to this collection. I loved the use of "zenith" and the conclusion was perfect.

Lily:

The first stanza was amazing and it only got better. I loved the simplicity of the rhyme scheme.

Ivy:

This one was my favorite. I love the rhymes and you certainly have a way with words. It's so raw and relatable.

Bluebell:

The first stanza once again was perfection. My favorite lines were definitely "The swathes of bluebell, A rose with few thorns," and "That infectious laugh was like the breeze in a field of bluebell" they just stuck out to me.

Violets:

This one is my overall favorite. It's so heartfelt. I love the repetition it sticks out and adds so much feeling. A fantastic end note to a wonderful poetry collection.

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