Cover: The D in Destiny should be capitalized. (4.5/5)
Blurb: The blurb tells us that the girls will fall in love and have to make sacrifices without giving much away. (5/5)
Hook: I was told by another writer friend, never start your story with “In a Realm”, which makes it sound more like a movie trailer than a piece of literature. (4/5)
Originality: I like the fact you made it in script format that’s not that common on wattpad I feel (10/10)
Character development: Well, there isn’t much development that can be done in the first chapter. (14/15)
Grammar & Spelling: My eyes and my text to speech reader didn’t catch any grammar or spelling errors. (20/20)
Flow: I think it flowed pretty well with the character interactions. (20/20)
Enjoyment: I’ll be honest I don’t really enjoy books with magic all that much. (17/20)
Total: 94.5/100)
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