Ohana Reviews

Review- The Right to Die

𝐑𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰𝐞𝐫: imogenogucci01
𝐀𝐮𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐫: avadel
𝐁𝐨𝐨𝐤 𝐓𝐢𝐭𝐥𝐞: The Right To Die

𝐑𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰: 𝐓𝐡𝐞 𝐑𝐢𝐠𝐡𝐭 𝐓𝐨 𝐃𝐢𝐞

𝐓𝐢𝐭𝐥𝐞: 𝟏𝟎/𝟏𝟎
At first I was skeptical, I have never come across this kind of title and I was hoping you would do a thing.. And you did.

𝐂𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐫:𝟓/𝟏𝟎
It is good but it doesn't suit the genre, we are talking about knights, magnates, capital cities, I expect to see a hunger games type of cover, this cover gives the vibe of a teen fiction about a bad boy.

𝐃𝐞𝐬𝐜𝐫𝐢𝐩𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧:𝟓/𝟓
It is AMAZING, when I read it I was nodding happily, I couldn't wait to start reading.

𝐆𝐫𝐚𝐦𝐦𝐞𝐫, 𝐬𝐩𝐞𝐥𝐥𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐨𝐫 𝐯𝐨𝐜𝐚𝐛𝐮𝐥𝐚𝐫𝐲: 𝟒/𝟓
I dislikes how you failed to introduce so much vocabulary in the first chapter I wished you had subtly explained some terms so I wasn't as confused in the first chapters, other than that, it is well edited. (Though I did notice some minor tense errors)

𝐏𝐚𝐜𝐢𝐧𝐠:𝟏𝟎/𝟏𝟎
The pacing was amazing actually. At first I hated that it began with a character trying to break into a building but later on I absolutely loved it because it was the driving force of the entire story.

𝐏𝐥𝐨𝐭: 𝟏𝟎/𝟏𝟎
Amazing plot, it is absolutely refreshing to read a good book about a very well written underdog that is very easy to relate with. When I was nearing the end of the story I was literally in pain cause I didn't want to wait.

𝐂𝐡𝐚𝐫𝐚𝐜𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝐝𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐥𝐨𝐩𝐦𝐞𝐧𝐭: 𝟏𝟎/𝟏𝟎
Your characters have so much personality. I could see M'yu being a real human being, he grows so much over the course of the story.

𝐖𝐫𝐢𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐬𝐭𝐲𝐥𝐞: 𝟏𝟎/𝟏𝟎
Perfectly suited for the genre of the story.

𝐓𝐞𝐧𝐬𝐢𝐨𝐧: 𝟏𝟎/𝟏𝟎
There were so many instances where I was filled with so much anxiety, I couldn't even stop and comment, I was literally on the edge of my couch.

𝐑𝐞𝐚𝐝𝐞𝐫 𝐞𝐧𝐠𝐚𝐠𝐞𝐦𝐞𝐧𝐭: 𝟏𝟎/𝟏𝟎
This is an astonishing read, it is actually sickening how little the reads are.
I go through a lot of books per week so it was refreshing having a book that made me tense all over.

𝐒𝐢𝐝𝐞 𝐧𝐨𝐭𝐞: I'm really sorry for how late this review was, I was going to upload it earlier but it wasn't working out. I believe it is God's way of telling me to finish the book before making my final decision. I really loved it.