Reviewer: doggx_
Book: Ricochet
Author: deejayDJ010
Title: Ricochet is a creative title for a book! When I searched it up, there were lots of books with the title "My tears of Ricochet" Or other stuff. Since your book has little amount of readers, your book didn't come up first when I searched for it.(4/5)
Plot: Great plot! I love how authors find ways to be creative and write books with their imaginations! I have never seen a book like this (Mainly because I have never read books about kidnapping or things related to those)(25/25)
Blurb: Blurb was too short, and there was no introduction to the characters of the protagonist. Blurbs are usually a description of a book or a small description for readers to read. They can decide if your book is what they are interested in or not.(4/10)
Engagement: The plot was good, but I don't have the motivation to continue reading the next chapter. I have an extension that can read your book word count, and one of them is 4.5k words which I almost skipped it. Also, your book has thick paragraphs, so I needed another chrome extension to help me. (Read aloud). When the chapters progress, I see you made a lot of difference. Your paragraphs were getting good, dialogues were in a single paragraph (Some)(4/10)
Grammar: Great! Just some small mistakes, like there, were no periods or commas, and when I read the book out loud (Read aloud extension) the bot had trouble reading sentences. (13/15)
Vocabulary: Such great vocabulary you have there! I am speechless! (9/10)
Character: Your characters rarely have any introductions, and I had trouble understanding your character. Or maybe because I didn't read it too well. (7/10)
Writing Style: Paragraphs are too thick, and you used "Show and Not Tell" to another level. Couldn't decide because you were progressing when every chapter was posted.(8/10)
Cover: The cover was too simple, if you want, you can add some images of your protagonist or some other stuff to spice things up. Seeing your cover isn't eye-catching. (2/5)
Overall: To be honest, it is such a great book! Plot was doing well, and you progressed through your book. I think that what you need to improve is how you write your characters and the cover.
Total:76/100
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