Ohana Reviews

Review 🐠 Rich Kids II

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Cover: I love the cover so much the brown background makes them stand out, especially with the outline. (5/5)

Blurb: It doesn’t tell us much only that her ex- shows up. Not enough to make me pick it up and read it. (4/5)

Hook: Please show it’s their anniversary instead of telling me. (3/5)

Originality: Murdered by the ex is not as cliche as being murdered by the spouse. (9/10)

Character development: I don’t know the characters well enough to notice if they developed or not. (15/15)

Grammar & Spelling: There are a few grammar mistakes and a couple spelling errors (15/20) 

Flow: Not gonna lie, I was a bit distracted by the lyrics. I had to start scrolling past them. (17/20)

Enjoyment: I don’t like things with the undead, so ghosts and things like that put me off. (15/20)

Total: (83/100)