Reviewer: Juleove
Loving a Stranger by JordanBurton534
Title: I love the title, it's simple and easy to remember. (5/5)
Cover: Your cover is pretty good but my eye was drawn to the a that seemed a bit off center. (4/5)
Blurb: Nice blurb it tells what the story is about without giving too much away. (5/5)
Hook: It was very intriguing and love how you introduced the protagonist's friends. (4/5)
Grammar: I didn't catch any mistakes here so good job. (10/10)
Spelling: There were a couple of instances where words were misspelled. For instance, Jordan said it was are table instead of ours. (9/10)
Flow: The flow was phenomenal and love how the scene never changed. Was just a guy talking to his friends in a dinner. The flashbacks were great as well. (10 /10)
Enjoyment: I really enjoyed it and couldn't stop reading it once I started. (10/10)
Total: 57/60
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