By: ItsAasen
Cover: The cover is beautiful and makes me want to watch a Chinese drama. (5/5)
Blurb: It tells us what they're going to face and how they're going to fall in love. (5/5)
Hook: Makes me wonder what he's packing for. (5/5)
Originality: I don't know much about fantasy books because I normally don't read them (too much magic), so I believe your story is original (10/10)
Character development: They fell in love kinda quickly, it feels like. (14/15)
Grammar & Spelling: I didn't catch any grammar errors. (20/20)
Flow: The flow was really good, and the sentences were nice and descriptive (20/20)
Enjoyment: Honestly, I can see why people would enjoy it, but honestly it's not for me but that's my fault should have read the blurb before accepting it. You have an amazing writing style.(20/20)
Total: (99/100)
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