Ferolsket 🐠

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By: queenofheartsMal

Cover: I love the colors. (5/5)

Blurb: It makes me curious what crimes Isaac committed. (5/5)

Hook: I love how you started it at school with her opening her locker. (5/5)

Originality: They met before his first day of school with a letter and I have never seen that before. (10/10)

Character development: It's too soon to tell, but I can see Zo rebel against her mother or Isaac going to class to make her mom happy (14/15)

Grammar & Spelling: Nothing incorrect stood out to me. (20/20)

Flow: The flow is superb and I love the alternating point of views. (20/20)

Enjoyment: I loved the dinner scene with her having a solo brownie eating contest until she seemed to be high. (20/20)

Total: (99/100)

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