By: queenofheartsMal
Cover: I love the colors. (5/5)
Blurb: It makes me curious what crimes Isaac committed. (5/5)
Hook: I love how you started it at school with her opening her locker. (5/5)
Originality: They met before his first day of school with a letter and I have never seen that before. (10/10)
Character development: It's too soon to tell, but I can see Zo rebel against her mother or Isaac going to class to make her mom happy (14/15)
Grammar & Spelling: Nothing incorrect stood out to me. (20/20)
Flow: The flow is superb and I love the alternating point of views. (20/20)
Enjoyment: I loved the dinner scene with her having a solo brownie eating contest until she seemed to be high. (20/20)
Total: (99/100)
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