Reviewer Juleove
Presley by Elementary519
Title: It’s short simple an easy to remember. (5/5)
Cover: The colors are really nice and suit each other well. (5/5)
Blurb: It gives information about the story without giving too much away great job. (5/5)
Hook: I normally don’t read stories that start of with texting but you’ve executed it really well. (4.5/5)
Grammar: I haven’t caught any grammar errors so great. (10/10)
Spelling: There was a part in the story when you used tighten instead of tightened. (9/10)
Flow: It’s a good story but the switching back in forth between the text and the pov is somewhat confusing. (9/10)
Enjoyment: It’s honestly rather enjoyable and may be about college students but is appropriate for all ages. (10/10)
Total: (57.5/60)
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