Ohana Reviews

Review- The Daydreamers Club: Class of 2001

Reviewer- kinalhariya
Book: The Daydreamers Club: Class of 2001
Author- RookWri78

Blurb:

Blurb is well-written. Nice start, gets you hooked right away. I was really intrigued by reading the blurb. The story seems to be one of a kind just after reading this. It is pretty unique as this happens way later after they find the machine. It feels like a story after a happily ever after. The titles/adjectives given for the characters have also gained my interest. Looking forward to seeing what will happen when such different people come together for a single mission.

Moving towards the chapters,

Awesome start. The change in the goon's expressions and reactions made a huge impact to show the capabilities of the detective.

Detailing is good. The actions and minor things in the surrounding are shown so well that we can imagine the entire scene, without breaking away from the story.

Her awkwardness at the show of affection was cute.

Nice cliffhanger at the end. Makes me curious about what must have happened. Probably a case, but let's see.

It is nice to see how every character is somehow getting involved. It looks like they all are going to meet soon.

I found it really hilarious when the actor was taught the taste of his own medicine.

Character's tactics for the role and his concern for his aunt; the change of personality depending on the situation felt realistic.

Dae-ho seems to be working too hard because of loans and his brother. I have a suspicion that his brother is lying about not drinking, but we will have to see in future chapters.

The scene of the daughter and elderly driver was cute and fun. Her father seemed too concerned to be someone who didn't care for her for ten years.

I am interested to know the backstories of each character. They all seem intriguing.

It was really hilarious when Jae-seong called Seol-hee ajumma when she was younger than him.

The reunion was really interesting to read.

Enjoyed the attitude and personality of Na Eun-kyung. I am really liking her character until now. Now everything depends on the reason why she was locked in the jail for me to decide.

A cyborg. I am getting more and more interested. Chocolate smoothie in the morning, seems like my type of person, although she really isn't a person😂.

I am really excited about the pebbles and what they entail.

*****
Characterization is done brilliantly. I like how characters are introduced through separate chapters, giving each and every one equal importance. I found every character intriguing. It made me itch to find out more about their lives.

Descriptions and detailing are just perfect. Not too much to get bored but still giving us a better visualization of the background and the character's subtle actions.

I can't say much about the plot as characters are just being introduced and have just united. However, I have loved each and every chapter. There wasn't a single dull moment.

Writing style is really awesome. Words flow smoothly. I have been hooked to the story right from the start. Details are just enough for us to get a gist of what's happening while still being curious. Just look out for unnecessary spaces in between the paragraphs.

At first the scene breaks were given by a single period. However, that too stopped after a while with just huge spaces taking place between the scenes. I would suggest checking and applying scene breaks wherever necessary.

At some places there was too much unnecessary space between paragraphs (not talking about the time where the scene changed).

Grammar
A typo in chapter 1.5
How does he know? is written instead of How does she know?

Apart from this, the book is grammatically perfect for me.

Last words,

Absolutely loved the story until now. Concept is unique and the characters are intriguing too. I really enjoyed how all different situations aligned to reach a common goal. It was done very artistically.

Main plot hasn't started yet, but I am already hooked. Looking forward to seeing how the story progresses.

Thanks for choosing me. Keep writing!!