𝐑𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰𝐞𝐫: imogenogucci01
𝐁𝐨𝐨𝐤 𝐭𝐢𝐭𝐥𝐞: Feelstora
𝐀𝐮𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐫: lemon0804
Title: 10/10
Your title perfectly suits your anthology. Your poems don't have a specific pattern or theme, it is ever changing, just like emotions.
Cover: 10/10
The cover is so cute, it matches the book so well.
Writing style: 10/10
Your writing style differs per poems, some of your poems feel lyrical and give off an Innocent vibe where as others make use of strong vocabulary making them sound more mature.
Use of figures of speech: 20/20
You are the first writer to check all my boxes, everything from onomatopoeia to simile is present. Absolutely beautiful.
Imagery: 6/10
Most of your poems aren't very descriptive, some of the rhymes don't suit the theme of the poems. I also noticed that you continue to use the same rhyme scheme of as bb cc did and it gets boring after a while. I suggest you switch it up a bit.
Flow of words: 10/10
You have an amazing vocabulary and it is evident in your writing.
Enjoyment: 6/10
As I have mentioned, you tend to use the same rhyme scheme which gets boring after a while, your poems don't have to rhyme at all..
Also, given that your collection is lengthy, some poems are subpar to other. This doesn't mean that they are bad poems, it just means that they do not compare to poems with more complex themes making then seem bland.
Originality: 10/10
You are one of the first poets that has diversified themes. Not everything was dark and heavy, some where cute and lighthearted.
Grammer, spelling and vocabulary: 4/10
While you have a large vocabulary, your spelling and grammar is not so good. I suggest you run you work through grammerly (or pro writing aid on PC).
Side note: there was a lot of generalizing in this review because your collection is large.
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